creative thinking ~ greener living
I know all about that moment of staring at the blank page. It's a relief when it passes. Beautifully written.
This is a very nice pairing.
i like the connection between the sky & your muse...
I really like the tanka - I'm sure many can relate.
both work very well for me... branches in the haiku as if they want to erase the moon and a moment many can relate to well captured in the tanka
This feels like night is filling you pen with ink...
I can relate to the empty page - sometimes nothing comes.
Yes, it happens like that! Nice parallels...
Ah to be like a tree reaching for the moon when it's time to write! These are wonderful.Writing in Faith: Poems
Your poems make me feel the loneliness of writing, the desire for beauty. I love them so much. Our submission can be found here. Thank you for visiting.
i guess we were thinking similarly with the first line in yours...your poem is much better than mine though...thank you.
I like the connection between the metaphorical in the first and the more down to earth blank page of the second.
cold moonbranches scribbledon the sky
I really like the first one. Thanks goodness there will still be avenue for our haiku efforts!!!
The first one is so strong. Its like the branches are trying to dip the sky to write on the moon.
These both are very evocative and indicative of one's creative process.
Staring is so tiring. I'm always so glad when something clicks.
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