Tuesday 22 December 2009

blizzard -
the creak of new snow
under my shoes.

9 comments:

PurestGreen said...

I love the simple joy in this.

steven said...

crafty green - i walked through some woods today where there's a slight skin of snow over ice. it's minus nineteen today so the snow is dry and creaks and growns when you step on it. your words were a perfect accompaniment to that experience. have a lovely evening. steven

Christina said...

Exactly. Snow does creak when you walk on it.

Titus said...

I love that noise!

Thomma Lyn said...

My goodness, it cracks me up how we're so often on the same wavelength with our blog posts. :) What a lovely haiku. And how right you are, there's nothing like the creak of new snow. I have loved snow since I was a little girl.

Rachel Fox said...

Yes, we heard that creak a lot yesterday. It is a very specific noise!
x

poefusion said...

no mistaking the creaking noise of snow. it's very distinct. lovely writing. hope all is well.

Gillena Cox said...

nice

much love
gillena

maryt/theteach said...

Love the haiku! :)