Monday, 26 October 2015


autumn sun
in the changing leaves
a greenfinch glows


Magyar said...

A greenfinch; hid in the summer leaves; seasons mismatch.
__Ah yes, all things stand out when the milieu changes. Yours a fine haiku! _m

Anonymous said...

vivid haiku

Bill said...

Turns nicely on the pivotal middle line.

Lowcarb team member said...

I like it.

All the best Jan

Sallie (FullTime-Life) said...

Beautiful haiku, beautiful photos, beautiful blog, talented birder and blogger, stunning crafts! Honestly, if you weren't such a nice person, I'd be really jealous!

Simon Douglas Thompson said...

The subject of your poem has been a rare sight around here for many years, but they are now making a comeback