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That is a very sad Haiku
Sad reality - excellent crafting!
Congrats on the accepted work and thanks for sharing this haiku. It reminds me a bit of one I wrote not long ago when thinking about our changing global environment and displaced animals / wildlife. an icy silence asbrown bear departs … woods weeping
I think you should follow this up with a happy rabbit haiku. :-(
HelloO That Haiku is good and touching although it is very sad. Our Haiku Society would have chosen it!Congratulations on your accepted work!!
I liked it.And mega-congratulations!
I saw this on twitter and thought it was quite sad. But very poetic :)
They couldn't handle the depth of emotion that a rabbit has.....
A whole story in so few highly emotional words. Excellent.
congratulations, Juliet! wonderful news.and I like the rejected haiku -- it's so evocative. makes me wonder if it was her mother; makes me wonder if you scooped her up and took her home.
a sad theme; a skillfully wrought haikumuch lovegillena
Lisa - it was very sad to see the bunny tooTumblewords - thanksDaisy - thanks for sharing your haiku, its very poignantbunnygirl - yes I should, I have written some happy bunny haiku in the past...sapphire, Titus, Paul, Roadbunner, Janice, Gillena - thanks!d.moll - too often bunnies are underestimated aren't they? angie - we wondered if the roadkill had been the baby rabbit's parent or sibling,
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