hang ripe on the trees -
free snacks!
bonfire smoke
rises from the garden -
sharp frost.
a robin perches
on a bare branched tree –
sunrise.
a robin sings
a melancholy song -
first snow fall
autumn wind -
the roughness of falling leaves
brushes my hair
More haiku on the senses on my Alter Ego blog.
Senses for One Deep Breath
12 comments:
Excellent series of haiku - I particularly like the last one, and can really feel the "roughness of falling leaves brushing my hair."
Well done:)
Wonderful series!
The bonfire smoke to frost part stood out to me. They shouldn't go together, but do.
bonfire smoke
rises from the garden -
sharp frost.
.... love it, love it, love it!
Nice, you got every sense in this series! Loved the bonfire smoke haiku.
Each one of these haiku are a treat to the senses!! Brilliant. much peace, JP
I enjoyed all of these. How do you do it! :)
Excellent, all. I manage to produce one. I'm impressed by how many you and a few others produce and all so rich and varied.
Great, seasonal haiku. The line "free snacks" made me giggle.
I like the first and last ones best. The first for its energy burst and the last for it's wistful romantic mood.
I love these. The robin's melancholy song and the smoke... sharp!
I especially liked the bonfire haiku
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