creative thinking ~ greener living
nice image with movement and sound!
very summery. i like it.
You might want to vary the construction; "curtains sway . . . blackbirds sing"curtains swayin the summer breezea song of blackbirdsbut that's just a thought. Ignore it if it gets in your way.
fresh.
Your haiku is lovely. It's a form of poetry that I am having fun with right now. Thanks for dropping by my livejournal and leaving a message.http://bevies-place.livejournal.com/27370.html
bill - good point, though I'm not sure if song of blackbirds would be waht i'd go for, but I'll think about it...Scot, Odessa, Jade, Bevies Place - thanks
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nice image with movement and sound!
very summery. i like it.
You might want to vary the construction; "curtains sway . . . blackbirds sing"
curtains sway
in the summer breeze
a song of blackbirds
but that's just a thought. Ignore it if it gets in your way.
fresh.
Your haiku is lovely. It's a form of poetry that I am having fun with right now.
Thanks for dropping by my livejournal and leaving a message.
http://bevies-place.livejournal.com/27370.html
bill - good point, though I'm not sure if song of blackbirds would be waht i'd go for, but I'll think about it...
Scot, Odessa, Jade, Bevies Place - thanks
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