Wednesday, 18 June 2008

haiku - rabbits

tall damp grass -
rabbits leap from rock to rock
on the hillside

5 comments:

Nathan said...

Very nice -- you capture movement and detail, it's like a short film.

polona said...

wow, a whole lot of information in three lines. excellent.

Janice Thomson said...

What lovely imagery - one can just picture them popping out of the tall grass. Great layers here.

gardenpath said...

This paints a nice picture. I don't often see rabbits here where I live in Maine, but had tons on the farm in Oklahoma.

noahthegreat said...

Ooh! I see them jumping!