Saturday, 10 March 2012

spring haiku

dew covered fields -
a stoat in ermine
bounces past


putting words
to the chaffinch's song -
ginger beer

the second of these was previously published in Blithe Spirit, the journal of the British Haiku Society


sandy said...

Very springy!
The second made me smile.

Jinksy said...

A stoat in ermine/ How grand! :)

Crafty Green Poet said...

Thanks Sandy!

It was wonderful, indeed, Jinksy and quite a surprise!

Carver said...

I love your spring haikus.

shoreacres said...

I'm always learning something here. I never had heard of a "stoat". Now I know a good bit about them - cute, but rather effective in bringing dinner home, too!

Lovely haiku!

Draffin Bears said...

Hi Juliet,

Beautiful... I love these haiku's and can visualize your fabulous Spring days.

Happy new week

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Stewart M said...

Hi there - thanks for the visit to my 'wordy blog' - glad you liked it.

The last poem is splendid - the rhythms of bird song are always fun to play with.

Stewart M - Australia

Carol Steel 5050 said...

Wonderful words evoke spring so well. Thank you.

Bill said...

A couple of dandies.