Crafty Green Poet: haiku

Thursday, 22 March 2012

on her nest -
a brooding coot
yawns

previously published in Blithe Spirit, the journal of the British Haiku Society

Carol Steel said...: You've captured the patience and weariness of waiting. I love the "yawns."; 2:13 pm
Ms Sparrow said...: I love the little moment you portrayed!; 2:37 pm
Bill said...: The one-word last line is hard to bring off, but you've done it here. Good one.; 4:18 pm
ashok said...: ha! nice one...; 5:20 pm
Anonymous said...: Those nest hours much not be easy!; 8:31 pm
Anonymous said...: That's a gorgeous haiku!; 12:10 am
bunnits said...: Wonderful. And I love coots!; 12:37 am
Caroline Gill said...: Sheer delight!; 12:34 pm