welcome party -
three rabbits lined up
by the station
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dandelions
rustle in a bag -
binky!
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golf course -
lost pet rabbits
run wild.
you can read more of my rabbit poems by following the links below:
another haiku
and another here
In the Dark
For anyone who hasn't kept rabbits, the binky is the rabbit dance of joy, you can find out more by following the link in the haiku.
Three rabbits (instead of dogs) for Totally Optional Prompts
17 comments:
I just saw the movie 'Miss Potter', on TV. I'm sure Beatrix had all these images in her mind (and eyes) when creating Peter Rabbit(etc).
Never had a rabbit as a pet. Infact, I've never had any pets. I don't THINK there's anything wrong with me :-)
These are such lovely hopping poems, the form fits the subject perfectly. You bought them to life so wonderfully I wanted to Woof!
RABBITS. always appropriate and welcome.
Always enjoy your rabbit poems Juliet - you capture their essence in a special way.
My sister had bunnies for pets and these poems captured them perfectly!
oh, this is sweet!
It's fun to read your rabbit poems! They are adorable animals - I've never owned one...
rabbits.. awesome, never really knew abt rabbits till a friend started a home for abandoned rabbits.. she absolutely postively loves her rabbits.. i can only imagine such a welcome party of three rabbits lined up..
wonderful! you paint a great, vivid picture of these three adorable rabbits. They breathe in this poem, and yet you write so sparingly - there is nothing useless or superfluous or anything that doesn't aid the depiction of these characters, for you do, after all, treat them like characters. marvellous.
What a pleasant way to say it. Loved them.
Running wild through a golf course is an amusing idea.
I love your haikus. It is such a great form of peotry.
Never had a bunny rabbit for a pet but when we take our dog walking on the local golf course, he loves to chase the hares even though they are always too fast for him. They always spot him way before he sees them.
Anywho, I wrote three poems for this entry : Dogs of War, Two Pets and My Dog Tom
-Bev
Anya, I wish I'ld a known ya! Heard a lot about ya! You must have been special.
I really like the golf one! :)
any poem with rabbits is a good poem! :-) BINKY
Oh Juliet, how wonderful! We had rabbits for years. Our last two were named, James (Jim-Bo) and Hazel. You are too you to remember "Upstairs Downstairs" on Masterpiece Theater but my then husband and I loved it. I think it is now on DVD. Your Haikus are great!
love you, Melanie
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