Friday, 9 May 2008

haiku

mist white sky -
invisible swifts
shriek

8 comments:

Geraldine said...

Wonderful! Felt like I was there, listening, soaking up the sights and sounds. Well done.

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Brian said...

keep head down
shuffling
miss beauty

YowlYY said...

:)
There will be more sun tomorrow, we hope...

Janice Thomson said...

Wonderful imagery - you put us right there.

polona said...

they keep hunting, regardless of the weather.... love it

Noah The Great said...

Lovely!

Rabbits' Guy said...

Haiku I like I just can't seem to write it

Scot said...

really nice