Saturday, 24 September 2011

haiku

pink clouds
above the city rooftops -
a skein of geese

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drizzle -
two kestrels
hover

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6 comments:

Wild_Bill said...

"skein of geese" lovely!

ashok said...

hmmm....cool!

Alison Wiley said...

Juliet, what is the structure of haiku considered to be in Scotland? I was taught 5-7-5 syllables per line . . . I think you have a different structure. I'm curious.
-- Hope all is well with you.

Jean said...

I love these - intensely evocative, both.

Bill said...

Two good ones, Juliet.

Amy E Thompson said...

love the image of a "skein of geese"