Tuesday 6 September 2011

haiku

grey skies -
herring gulls brace their wings
against the wind

*

stubbled fields -
afock of woodpigeons
takes flight

4 comments:

Bill said...

Nicely observed, Juliet.

Dave King said...

The second one carries a vivid image for me, though both are well formed.

Wild_Bill said...

Both wonderful but I particularly liked the image of gulls bracing their wings against the wind@

Manish Edida said...

Its very well formed! Thanks for sharing.