Saturday, 27 September 2008

Poison

sky burdened
with polluted clouds

falls

no wonder
birds struggle to nest

fail


Poison for Weekend Wordsmith.
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10 comments:

Veens said...

so true

Scot said...

i like the structure around the f words.

Janice Thomson said...

Your words strike a chord Juliet and well they should considering the number of species now on the endangered lists.

polona said...

powerful imges wit a poignant message

J.C. Montgomery said...

Stunning. Has left me speechless.

fourwindshaiga said...

Brilliant!

Sara said...

Very topical poem, considering how the whole world is thinking about going green. This could be the poem that speaks to the world on the subject.

grh said...

Hi. Found this poem through Poets Who Blog. The rhythm of the poem establishes a marvelous tension, enhancing the poem's meaning. Really nice.

Wordcrafter said...

Excellent momentum, Iam here via PWB.

Angel said...

Very good. It makes you stop and think.