creative thinking ~ greener living
both very good... te colour really works in both haiku.
Two brightly visual haiku. As polona points out,the red is beautifully placed.
Beautifully worded haiku. The color has a strong, vivid presence. I linger among the willow and take a seat on the red boat feeling the rain against my skin. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice night.
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both very good... te colour really works in both haiku.
Two brightly visual haiku. As polona points out,the red is beautifully placed.
Beautifully worded haiku. The color has a strong, vivid presence. I linger among the willow and take a seat on the red boat feeling the rain against my skin. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice night.
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