as I walk through the woods –
the first leaves open.
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under my nails
and in the lines of my hands –
life giving soil.
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white stone driveway
between neatly cut hedges –
one muddy footprint.
Earth, soil, mud for One Deep Breath
16 comments:
These poems, I can feel your call to Spring. The longing and yearning for green growth and the rich scent of life.
Oh, I really liked the second one! It just brings back nice memories...
These are fanatastic! #1 & 3 really resonated with me. Great haiku.
CGP,
These are great. The first piece really grabs me. I like the explicit inclusion of the narrator.
wonderful spring feeling to these!
love them all.
"life giving soil" is a wonderful vision on your hands. Lovely earth/mud haiku.
These haiku are all wonderful, but I really like the visual in the third one.
These all have a very natural rhythm and "earthy" feel...lovely!
white stone driveway
between neatly cut hedges –
one muddy footprint.
I really enjoyed all three, but this one has a bit of smile in it. Only one footprint? :-)
Juliet,
I like all three!
The third is most striking, like an Ansel Adams photo.
rel
I smiled when I read these - among others reasons because you notice the things I notice! :)
Three fine 'out and about' poems. I agree, they do all have a spring feeling.
I loved the first one! It brings me back home.
I really like the images your poems bring to my mind, a muddy footprint, and boots caked with mud.
I am walking in the muddy woods too!
These are wonderful - so evocative.
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