Friday 7 October 2016


turning leaves -
a vee of geese
skeins the sky

on second thoughts, after reading Simon's comment below, I think this is a better version

 turning leaves -
pink footed geese
skein the sky


Simon Douglas Thompson said...

I must keep an eye out for high flying pink footed geese on my travels!

Crafty Green Poet said...

Hi Simon, I saw several skeins today, definitely the time of year for them!

Gingi said...

Beautiful. I suck at haikus. I even bought a haiku book once.. but still... nope. Still suck at them! Yours are lovely! <3 -

Lynn said...

Lovely! And I love the vees of geese.

Lowcarb team member said...

I like both versions ...

Happy Weekend Wishes

All the best Jan

Bill said...

"pink-footed" raises a good haiku another notch.

Draffin Bears said...

Hi Juliet,

I always enjoy your haikus - thanks for sharing.
Enjoy the weekend

Pietro Brosio said...

A very pretty haiku, both versions.

Sandy said...

I like both versions.