Tuesday, 19 November 2013

haiku

not enough starlings
for a murmuration -
dusky moon

7 comments:

TexWisGirl said...

nice.

Mary said...

Very lovely. :)

Caroline Gill said...

So precise, so evocative ...

Tommaso Gervasutti said...

Very great, intensely "silent" and vibrant.

Ms Sparrow said...

Very nice. I just saw a small flock of starlings by my place for the first time yesterday.

Cat Mom said...

Hi Juliet, Maureen here. I very much enjoyed your haiku today. When I was 10 we studied haiku in school -the traditional 5-7-5 syllables. I still remember what I wrote:

sunset in the west
burning coals on open hearths
not as red as sky

Remember, I was just 10! :)

Optimistic Existentialist said...

Lovely :)