Wednesday 9 October 2013

Tanka

visions
of high wild mountains
in distant lands -
ravens circle
the town cemetery

8 comments:

Optimistic Existentialist said...

Oh I really like this.

Tommaso Gervasutti said...

Raven circle
the town cemetery

...
I got the news David King passed away.
I will miss his great voice Juliet.

The Weaver of Grass said...

Do you have ravens in Scotland Juliet?

Crafty Green Poet said...

Optimistic - thanks

Tommaso - ywes very sad news about David

Weaver - we get ravens in Edinburgh! They were circling the cemetry in Colinton which inspired this tanka...

James Brush said...

Beautiful.

James Brush said...

Lovely.

eileeninmd said...

I like this, it is so easy to picture in my mind.

Kathie Brown said...

Well, that is a story in a nutshell! What an image these words paint!