Thursday, 25 November 2010

winter bird haiku

through the traffic noise -
the soft calls of waxwings
in the trees

5 comments:

Caroline Gill said...

A clever juxtaposition of images, Juliet.

lakeviewer said...

Lovely!

Carver said...

Beautiful haiku. I can picture the scene in my mind.

Gabrielle Bryden said...

Love the juxtaposition of the soft calls with the harsh sound of traffic :)

Bill said...

Exemplary.