Thursday, 28 May 2009

seen from the train

I read about declining bird species, outside, crows mob a buzzard
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rabbits run along
under a hawthorn hedge -
deer in the field
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Edinburgh to Glasgow and back by train

4 comments:

Michelle Johnson said...

I imagine you were in bliss seeing so many beautiful creatures. Your writing is a nice tribute to what you saw from the train. Hope all is well. Have a nice day.

Coastcard said...

Good to find Michelle here before me! A clever juxtaposition, CGP.

Janice Thomson said...

That first one is just perfect Juliet. It must have been neat to see so much wildlife.

stupot said...

thanks for the US comment.
I love the train to Glasgow - lovely poem too.