Sunday 16 December 2007

haiku

pale sun -
frost glitters
on roofs


Beauty for One Deep Breath

29 comments:

Brian said...

frost glitters... very image in 6 words. love it

Greggo said...

simply gorgeous!

Lisa at Greenbow said...

Yes, I see it.

Janice Thomson said...

Beautiful!

Tumblewords: said...

Oh, yes! I see it! Beautiful!

mm said...

I can see it in my mind's eye. These short haikus are so effective, CGP.

By the way, I've tagged you!

shadows and clouds said...

hi there juliet. really like the haiku. you are managing to capture the season so well in so few words! wanted to let you know that i have just passed on the true blue blogging award to you.
happy monday.

Everydaythings said...

simply....beautiful those few words say it all!

SandyCarlson said...

Yes, yes, yes! That is wonderful.
Writing in Faith

Gerald (Ackworth born) said...

yes it was doing that here too this morning

Anonymous said...

Hi crafty,
Your haiku reminds me of the view from my window.
I live in the back of the building so all I can see are rooftops covered with snow.
Thanks for stopping in.

Anonymous said...

What a wonderful representation of a wonderful season.

Jo said...

Perfect......one of my favourite sights, that!

paisley said...

the view from on high... very lovely....

abby - the geek girl said...

beautiful beautiful beautiful!!
So simple yet it evokes a million memories and visions... love it!

Anonymous said...

You write simply beautiful words and are able to create such a powerful visual image.

Tracey

Anonymous said...

I can see it. I'll hold on to that image since we are back in Florida.

Marcia (MeeAugraphie)

Tiffany said...

That's beautiful and the image out my window this morning.

colleen said...

Tweet tweet. I'm perched there.

get zapped said...

Excellent and done so simply!

Richard Wells said...

Hey Julie,

Would have sent an email, but couldn't find an address- Thanks for your comment on my poem, I've done a rewrite and wanted to share it with you, so, if you're interested it's at:

A CAROL FOR ANOTHER BLOODY CENTURY

PS: I've been looking around your sites - very nice.

Quiet Paths said...

A totally visual piece - thank you.

this is my patch said...

Wow, says everything!

little wing writer said...

the simplicity and softness reflects a beautiful winter day..

Anonymous said...

oh yeah they glitter, nicely captured.

UL

Anonymous said...

short and lovely, I like it!!

Sandy, from gardenpath

spacedlaw said...

Frost has a way with beauty...

megan said...

simple, clear, crisp & beautiful

Patois42 said...

I love seeing your poem come to life.