Sunday, 16 December 2007

haiku

pale sun -
frost glitters
on roofs


Beauty for One Deep Breath

29 comments:

Brian said...

frost glitters... very image in 6 words. love it

Greggo said...

simply gorgeous!

Lisa at Greenbow said...

Yes, I see it.

Janice Thomson said...

Beautiful!

tumblewords said...

Oh, yes! I see it! Beautiful!

mm said...

I can see it in my mind's eye. These short haikus are so effective, CGP.

By the way, I've tagged you!

said...

hi there juliet. really like the haiku. you are managing to capture the season so well in so few words! wanted to let you know that i have just passed on the true blue blogging award to you.
happy monday.

Krissie said...

simply....beautiful those few words say it all!

Sandy Carlson said...

Yes, yes, yes! That is wonderful.
Writing in Faith

Ackworth Born said...

yes it was doing that here too this morning

Frances said...

Hi crafty,
Your haiku reminds me of the view from my window.
I live in the back of the building so all I can see are rooftops covered with snow.
Thanks for stopping in.

Alina Sharon said...

What a wonderful representation of a wonderful season.

Jo said...

Perfect......one of my favourite sights, that!

paisley said...

the view from on high... very lovely....

Abzdragon said...

beautiful beautiful beautiful!!
So simple yet it evokes a million memories and visions... love it!

Tracey said...

You write simply beautiful words and are able to create such a powerful visual image.

Tracey

Anonymous said...

I can see it. I'll hold on to that image since we are back in Florida.

Marcia (MeeAugraphie)

Tiffany said...

That's beautiful and the image out my window this morning.

colleen said...

Tweet tweet. I'm perched there.

get zapped said...

Excellent and done so simply!

rwellsrwells said...

Hey Julie,

Would have sent an email, but couldn't find an address- Thanks for your comment on my poem, I've done a rewrite and wanted to share it with you, so, if you're interested it's at:

A CAROL FOR ANOTHER BLOODY CENTURY

PS: I've been looking around your sites - very nice.

Quiet Paths said...

A totally visual piece - thank you.

this is my patch said...

Wow, says everything!

LittleWing said...

the simplicity and softness reflects a beautiful winter day..

UL said...

oh yeah they glitter, nicely captured.

UL

gardenpath said...

short and lovely, I like it!!

Sandy, from gardenpath

spacedlaw said...

Frost has a way with beauty...

megan said...

simple, clear, crisp & beautiful

Patois said...

I love seeing your poem come to life.