Interesting collage - glad I came by following your handy hint on my blog. I immediately rushed to 'white out' the """, as you suggested, and amazingly, blogger OK'd the change - but still wouldn't let me get the 'Drops' parallel. Still, it's much cleaner now, thanks to you.
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Hello Crafty~ I'm so enjoying this series of collage and writing you're doing. That feather is a great find. Hope all is well. Have a nice day.
What a beautiful feather, like the poem too. :)
oh CGP what a breath this blog is, so fresh, clean and bittersweet, i miss scotland.
not sure i've seen many "haiga" made in this manner but i certainly like it.
I'd have probably dropped the second indefinite article but ...
hey it's lovely anyway
Michelle, Deb, thanks, yes the feather was a great find, i love the irridescence in it.
Thanks Alice, for me your blog is bittersweet too - I miss my bunny!
neither have I Gerald, i have to admit. I did think about the second indefinite article but on balance left it in.
Just lovely - I love feathers and have collected a couple or three too.
Oh, what a very good collage, the feather is marvelous.
lovely - expressive and parsimonious - and visually appealing.
Interesting collage - glad I came by following your handy hint on my blog. I immediately rushed to 'white out' the """, as you suggested, and amazingly, blogger OK'd the change - but still wouldn't let me get the 'Drops' parallel. Still, it's much cleaner now, thanks to you.
Hello,
Thanks so much for your kind comment,love the little poem.x
I love this delightful and unique haiga!
The haiku captures the moment exactly - well done.
Nicely done. You might not need "a" in line 3.
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