creative thinking ~ greener living
lovely image and alliteration. :)
Long tailed tits - one of my favourite birds. Love the image.
Love the analogy of the long tails and long willow leaves - wonderful!
A really telling verse.
I like it! its nice
that's lovelyi watched these birds just yesterday in the park... well, actually i heard them before i could see them dahing from limb to limb
Wonderfully lyrical verse. I love your banner photograph as well. Thank you too for your nice comment on my blog.
Pretty visual,this haiku is wonderfulon the tongue.
I agree with Janice. I love the analogy! Beautiful!
I adore your haikus. Hope you get a book together!
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