Saturday, 29 March 2008

Haiku

dolphins swim
in pristine fish-rich seas -
oil reserves below.

10 comments:

Scot said...

good comment

polona said...

what an idyllic image... with ominous prospect!

Billy said...

"What polona said," as the saying goes. Excellent!

Janice Thomson said...

A scary thought Juliet when one considers how many animals are affected by oil spills. Loved the contrast in this haiku.

gautami tripathy said...

Scary thought. Hits out...

Rabbits' Guy said...

Me and Haiku in 7 words or less ..

"Like to read it, can't write it"

Nice job.

Tommaso Gervasutti said...

And I would continue:

And all the same they will keep swimming
as long as they can,
that's the law.

Best,
Davide

Selma said...

If only all marine life could swim untroubled, unfettered. Excellent haiku.

haiku-shelf said...

i love dolphins!

may these dolphins live in safety!

winterwood said...

I like..very much..wonderful image evoked for me.