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Oh yes, a killer last line. Literally.We have that here too. I'm still not used to it.
ooh... such idylic image and then shocking last line.great stuff!
yes, the last line does shock, which is good.
Powerful. I really like the contrast of feeling in this.:)
This has compact power--love it!Thanks for the visit--midwestpoet.wordpress.com
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Oh yes, a killer last line. Literally.
We have that here too. I'm still not used to it.
ooh... such idylic image and then shocking last line.
great stuff!
yes, the last line does shock, which is good.
Powerful. I really like the contrast of feeling in this.
:)
This has compact power--love it!
Thanks for the visit--
midwestpoet.wordpress.com
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