creative thinking ~ greener living
I always love your poems about Africa.Rosexo
How lovely, snakes and elephants, brings back memories. Thank you.
Beautiful forestSweet chirpingsGrazing deerPlaying monkeysSudden gunshotsChaotic noisesFlying birdsFallen tigerBeautiful Blog
Now THERE's adventure! Nice haiku!
the first on still has me laughing!
These are fabulous - I especially love the first. I could learn a few things about haiku from you. :)
the first one made me laugh out loud!
Very fun set; I really grinned at the first.
now *that's* adventure!! wow!
these are both wonderful, especially the first one. i laughed out loud and then read it again.
Lovely post. I like your play on expectations!
Yayay! A haiku which made me laugh out loud. Oops an elephant! Very cool.
That first one made me laugh!
The second one really made me catch my breath - what an adventure!
Isn't adventure just like that . . . we think we're after one thing only to discover something completely different! The surprise in adventure is so beautifully captured in your first haiku. I really want to go where your haiku lives.
Ah Juliet...these are wonderful hauku. I like the fact you always give links to broaden one's perspective of your verse. Loved the images these created.
My favorite is the first one. Such a surprise!
Humorous and fun.
These are great. I think I like the haiku better than the American Sentence - it's even more Spatter-like! Thanks for visiting my blog.
Thanks everyone! Glad you all laughed at the first one, its the kind of thing you can laugh at when you're at a safe distance! Glad - yes, the serendipity of it all...Janice - i like to include links, because I know that a lot of people won't know what I'm talking about otherwise! I still sometimes forget though. June - I prefer haiku too! Thanks for visiting!
I absolutely loved the first 'ku. I got a good laugh from that one. Thank you for sharing such beautiful pieces. Keep up the good work.
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