Thursday, 8 November 2007

haiku

red sun rises
above misty fields -
robin sings

8 comments:

jem said...

Nice. I like the way the sun and the robin echo each other.

Crafty Green Poet said...

thanks jem, that's how I thought of it as I wrote it!

Brian said...

event horizon
trees waver and sway
close to touch

Not as good as your's Crafty.

Whitesnake said...

Sweet short and serene

Selma said...

I love it when you haiku.
Gorgeous imagery!

Jo said...

Yes, I like the link between sun and robin too.

Ričardas said...

very beautiful. I miss robins singing, have to wait for spring though

Krissie said...

starting to take on that cold wintery feel to the weather over there. In contrast we are havinga very hot weekeknd - 37C !