hang ripe on the trees -
free snacks!
bonfire smoke
rises from the garden -
sharp frost.
a robin perches
on a bare branched tree –
sunrise.
a robin sings
a melancholy song -
first snow fall
autumn wind -
the roughness of falling leaves
brushes my hair
More haiku on the senses on my Alter Ego blog.
Senses for One Deep Breath
13 comments:
Excellent series of haiku - I particularly like the last one, and can really feel the "roughness of falling leaves brushing my hair."
Well done:)
Wonderful haiku - and like Becca, I like the last one best. Well done!
Wonderful series!
The bonfire smoke to frost part stood out to me. They shouldn't go together, but do.
bonfire smoke
rises from the garden -
sharp frost.
.... love it, love it, love it!
Nice, you got every sense in this series! Loved the bonfire smoke haiku.
Each one of these haiku are a treat to the senses!! Brilliant. much peace, JP
I enjoyed all of these. How do you do it! :)
Excellent, all. I manage to produce one. I'm impressed by how many you and a few others produce and all so rich and varied.
Great, seasonal haiku. The line "free snacks" made me giggle.
I like the first and last ones best. The first for its energy burst and the last for it's wistful romantic mood.
I love these. The robin's melancholy song and the smoke... sharp!
I especially liked the bonfire haiku
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