tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post116401607852914950..comments2024-03-28T10:05:36.756+00:00Comments on Crafty Green Poet: Autumnal haiku - sensesCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164301077069299692006-11-23T16:57:00.000+00:002006-11-23T16:57:00.000+00:00I especially liked the bonfire haikuI especially liked the bonfire haikuAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164293797807479222006-11-23T14:56:00.000+00:002006-11-23T14:56:00.000+00:00I love these. The robin's melancholy song and the ...I love these. The robin's melancholy song and the smoke... sharp!Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164204757454922162006-11-22T14:12:00.000+00:002006-11-22T14:12:00.000+00:00I like the first and last ones best. The first for...I like the first and last ones best. The first for its energy burst and the last for it's wistful romantic mood.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164156769224080942006-11-22T00:52:00.000+00:002006-11-22T00:52:00.000+00:00Great, seasonal haiku. The line "free snacks" made...Great, seasonal haiku. The line "free snacks" made me giggle.Jodihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10128966776368179139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164154304886058302006-11-22T00:11:00.000+00:002006-11-22T00:11:00.000+00:00Excellent, all. I manage to produce one. I'm imp...Excellent, all. I manage to produce one. I'm impressed by how many you and a few others produce and all so rich and varied.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164073267034817002006-11-21T01:41:00.000+00:002006-11-21T01:41:00.000+00:00I enjoyed all of these. How do you do it! :)I enjoyed all of these. How do you do it! :)Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07815553702716450707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164072578243492852006-11-21T01:29:00.000+00:002006-11-21T01:29:00.000+00:00Each one of these haiku are a treat to the senses!...Each one of these haiku are a treat to the senses!! Brilliant. <I>much peace, JP</I>JP (mom)https://www.blogger.com/profile/03120439923927414464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164061945879913952006-11-20T22:32:00.000+00:002006-11-20T22:32:00.000+00:00Nice, you got every sense in this series! Loved t...Nice, you got every sense in this series! Loved the bonfire smoke haiku.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164059662076821512006-11-20T21:54:00.000+00:002006-11-20T21:54:00.000+00:00bonfire smokerises from the garden -sharp frost......bonfire smoke<BR/>rises from the garden -<BR/>sharp frost.<BR/><BR/>.... love it, love it, love it!kerrdelunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09779897207670867347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164054239723412882006-11-20T20:23:00.000+00:002006-11-20T20:23:00.000+00:00The bonfire smoke to frost part stood out to me. T...The bonfire smoke to frost part stood out to me. They shouldn't go together, but do.Mimeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13549790359115165117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164048028615831992006-11-20T18:40:00.000+00:002006-11-20T18:40:00.000+00:00Wonderful series!Wonderful series!Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164040851449365012006-11-20T16:40:00.000+00:002006-11-20T16:40:00.000+00:00Wonderful haiku - and like Becca, I like the last ...Wonderful haiku - and like Becca, I like the last one best. Well done!paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1164035445069267522006-11-20T15:10:00.000+00:002006-11-20T15:10:00.000+00:00Excellent series of haiku - I particularly like th...Excellent series of haiku - I particularly like the last one, and can really feel the "roughness of falling leaves brushing my hair."<BR/><BR/>Well done:)Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.com