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Monday, 26 October 2015

haiku

autumn sun
in the changing leaves
a greenfinch glows

6 comments:

  1. A greenfinch; hid in the summer leaves; seasons mismatch.
    __Ah yes, all things stand out when the milieu changes. Yours a fine haiku! _m

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  2. Anonymous1:14 am

    vivid haiku

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  3. Turns nicely on the pivotal middle line.

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  4. I like it.

    All the best Jan

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  5. Beautiful haiku, beautiful photos, beautiful blog, talented birder and blogger, stunning crafts! Honestly, if you weren't such a nice person, I'd be really jealous!

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  6. The subject of your poem has been a rare sight around here for many years, but they are now making a comeback

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