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Thursday 2 April 2009

Spring

Suddenly
sound travels differently
blackbirdsong counterpoints
playground shouts

the air is gentler -
scarves become annoying
and winter coats are left at home

dead looking wood
buds, unfurling
architecture
of entire new worlds.





Spring for Read Write Poem
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17 comments:

  1. Anonymous9:01 am

    The birds seem to be singing especially loudly this year and even my old plum tree is budding. you capture spring perfectly.

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  2. gautami tripathy9:17 am

    Loved the use of 'unfurling'

    sweat trickles down my back

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  3. Gordon Mason11:22 am

    Like "scarves become annoying".

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  4. shadows and clouds1:38 pm

    love it all so much. rings true

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  5. LA Nickers1:41 pm

    Let's toss those scarves and coats!

    ;-)

    NaPoWriMo - April 2nd -

    PUSHBUTTON PRODUCE – A CHOICE TO BE CHEWED

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  6. Kelly1:45 pm

    Ah, spring. Some great images and feelings evoked here. Thank you for this!

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  7. Unknown9:07 pm

    Love 'blackbirdsong counterpoints playground shouts'

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  8. one more believer11:25 pm

    what a register of spring... how funny that scarves and coats will soon be replaced by sleeveless blouses and sandals... can't wait.. love yr descriptive worlds of sound, air and plants... as a crazy gardener i can hardly wait... watching the buds form on trees and bushes... tho still very cold and snowing...

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  9. christine1:59 am

    You capture the essence of the blossoming season. So nice!

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  10. RG3:50 am

    That's easy for you to say!

    First because I coudn't poet spring (or much else)no matter how I tried, and second because it just won't get here!

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  11. Jeeves5:24 am

    New architecture indeed. Nice one.

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  12. jem3:41 pm

    'scarves become annoying' is a great line. Actually I didn't get mine out this year. I'm never that keen on them, a bit too constricting for me.

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  13. Janice Thomson3:05 am

    Gosh I just love this Juliet - the imagery is superb! Spring is finally here.

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  14. Anonymous5:52 pm

    Splendidly written.
    I love hope ~ and this poem has it in spades!

    Claire

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  15. Vixen8:04 pm

    I love your poetry, but this one is particularly lovely.

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  16. Lucy12:53 pm

    I like 'scarves become annoying'!

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  17. Anonymous1:09 pm

    I love that phrase "unfurling/architecture/of entire new worlds"

    That it it exactly, as you wait for the leaves to come and fill in the empty space!

    (and I love your comment tag "birds singing")

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