Love this beautiful description of the earth--I felt that it was this like those before me..."veils of white"--what a perfect vision of clouds. Love, D.
Magnificent. Short and to the point. The qualities of good art, and of a possible message that could get through the thick skulls of those destroying the planet.
Yes its the earth as seen from orbit. Though guatami seeing it a spearl is interesting because I was also thinking of the earth as a precious stone (hence the title I guess)
Oh yes, it's very precious isn't it - unique, in fact. Off to check your other blog now.
ReplyDeleteFireworks?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. I see the Earth from orbit. Such a fragile marble in the darkness of space.
ReplyDeleteI love the poem and tried hard to figure it out and then I read Brian's comment and totally agree. Earth seems right. I am glad my idea was workable.
ReplyDeleteVery cool! Nice use of the prompt.
ReplyDeleteJuliet,
ReplyDeleteWell done girl!
Our oasis.
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Good job with the prompt! I think you nailed it!
ReplyDeleteYes, the Earth. Good job!
ReplyDeleteIt makes me think of the ocean at night. Very pretty imagery.
ReplyDeleteLove this beautiful description of the earth--I felt that it was this like those before me..."veils of white"--what a perfect vision of clouds.
ReplyDeleteLove,
D.
The big blue marble, as it were... just lovely! And well done!
ReplyDeleteI thought of it as pearl.
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I LOVED it! I thought of the moon but earth is even better ;)
ReplyDeleteI'm thinking of the photos I've seen of the earth with the halo of the atmosphere. Very lovely--both here and the alter-ego.
ReplyDeletePrecious, indeed. Lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteVery haiku like -- if it is the earth, this is a beautiful description of it.
ReplyDeleteCome on, Brian, I was going to say the earth lol. Great little poem, CGP
ReplyDeleteCome on, Brian, I was going to say the earth lol. Great little poem, CGP
ReplyDeletevery beautiful...I like its shortness...how it capitalizes on one image
ReplyDeleteWonderful. This is a beautiful picture.
ReplyDeletevery vortex; can that be a word?
ReplyDeleteReading this made me quite happy.
ReplyDeleteThe ocean! Even if it isn't, this is the perfect description of the ocean. Very nice, love the sounds.
ReplyDeleteMagnificent. Short and to the point. The qualities of good art, and of a possible message that could get through the thick skulls of those destroying the planet.
ReplyDeleteGood job.
This was so visual. Even when I wasn't sure, at first, I could envision something from the natural world.
ReplyDeleteSo visual and beautiful. Mine is finally written. Took awhile.
ReplyDeleteYes its the earth as seen from orbit. Though guatami seeing it a spearl is interesting because I was also thinking of the earth as a precious stone (hence the title I guess)
ReplyDeleteWonderful description! It's easy to picture :o)
ReplyDeleteLove the previous comments. I first thought of an eye ... but the iris is not quite a backdrop :)
ReplyDeleteLovely, JP