Tuesday, 31 January 2017

haiku

clouds gather
carrion crows fight
in the tree tops

5 comments:

Marcie said...

Mmm, I love the imagery of this haiku. Crows gathering are somewhat similar to clouds gathering, perhaps storm clouds!

Crafty Green Poet said...

Hi Marcie, yes there's a storm on the horizon....

gabriellebryden said...

sums up the situation in the world today :(

Magyar said...

__Seems there are many crow-ku of late, and yours Juliet is one of the best. If there is more than one crow, there always seems to be a "tussle" between or among them.
__ This, a sight many of us may have seen, and I just envisioned the ice; slip-slide-in away. Smiles_!

two crows
play carrion tug-rope
icy roadway

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Lowcarb team member said...

I like this, the words are perfect.

All the best Jan