Wednesday, 12 December 2012

Cold

Low sun shivers the frozen pond
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Patterns in the icy puddles like the contour lines in a map of a lost world
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Brambles crisp with frost
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meanwhile I have another haiku on Daily Haiku - you can read it here

9 comments:

Caroline Gill said...

Beautiful imagery ... it seems we are sharing this cold snap!

Bill said...

Good work, here and at Daily Haiku

Optimistic Existentialist said...

This puts me in the holiday spirit :)

Tommaso Gervasutti said...

Rattling Rain...Your haikus remind me of my first encounter with them:
Basho "The Narrow Road To The Deep North".

Titus said...

Lovely, and good golly, isn't it?

Ms Sparrow said...

You captured the essence of a frosty morning brilliantly!

Rabbits' Guy said...

We haven't seen the sun for several days. Not cold, just thick clouds.

Carrie Burtt said...

I can feel it in your words....beautiful capturing of the winter season. :-)

the cuby poet said...

Love it creates pictures in my mind.