Sunday, 24 October 2010

playground haiku

children's playground -
a crow balances
on a swing


previously published in Blithe Spirit, the journal of the British Haiku Society

9 comments:

sandy said...

That doesn't surprise me, crows will try anything.

Michelle May said...

I have the best mental image of this. Wonderful!
xx, shell

EG Wow said...

Your words evoke a lovely picture in my mind. :)

Draffin Bears said...

The words you have shared of the playground are wonderful.

Happy week
Carolyn

Caroline Gill said...

A delightful cameo - fanciful but doubtless true!

Crafty Green Poet said...

sandy - won't they just!

Michelle, EG Wow, Draffin Bears - thanks!

Caroline - all true, it was very entertaining to watch

Megan Coyle said...

Another excellent image. Your haikus are such treats.

Arts Web Show said...

Excellent haiku.
i cant count the amount of times i've seen that vision. lol

gabriellebryden said...

Haha - love it - what an image of the crow on the swing.