Sunday, 22 August 2010

haiku

centipede
stranded on a pavement -
sudden shower

7 comments:

DazyDayWriter said...

Thanks for sharing this! Have you discovered The Haiku Foundation -- there's a link on my facebook page. Looks interesting! Keep writing! Always enjoy your work and lovely way with words!

Titus said...

Oh, that's just a great picture!

Naquillity said...

what a great image you've created. i can picture the centipede trying to find cover and getting doused all the while. hope all is well.

bunnits said...

I'm thinking all those little feet on hot pavement, the shower is a welcome relief.

Bill said...

Very nice. I'd say "the pavement," but two nations divided by a single language and all that.

EG Wow said...

I am feeling very sorry for the centipede.

Alan Summers said...

Centipedes are so cool though, must have been fascinating being able to study it. I hope it managed to continue its journey though?

Alan
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