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That is beautiful. Classic English landscape poetry painting with just enough Japanese haiku influence to give depth and sensibility but still in motion through the train window. Beautiful.
I feel quite serene after reading this. Your poetry often does that to me. Your imagery is tender in this piece. A treat.
haiku glimpses from a train window really works. I like them....but should the print not be a bit shoogly?!
Nice, I can hear the wheels on the track too.
Three lovely images from the train window.The leaves on your banner are so restful I want them in front of my eyes all day!
wonderful impressions, and more than that...
Very deftly done.
Excellent verses Juliet love the imagery of that last one so much.
Just the way it looks along our road these days ....
Lovely! I live in the city, with all that hustle and bustle. This piece just made me feel so serene & peaceful :) It's a nice feeling.
I love writing about what I see out of car windows (or in this case... train) it's such a beautiful compilation of fleeting glimpses through glass.
Great that you managed to capture such treasures on your way from A to B.
I felt like I was looking out the window. I'll bet you enjoyed that ride.
I love your blog! Thank you. I am glad to have found you. I enjoy the uplifting feeling your posts inspire. Thank you!Linda
I'm always amazed when such simple wording can evoke such vivid images. Nicely done! Makes me yearn for a contemplative train trip....
Your poetry is lovely... Thank you for transforming me out into the misty fields with the heron! Roxanne
a haiku journal--no better way
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