Saturday, 15 November 2008

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trees thrash
in the high winds
clouds float by




Floating for Weekend Wordsmith

12 comments:

Doug P. Baker said...

I've been intrigued by the different reactions that clouds and trees have to the wind also. Same force, such different attitudes that meet it!

Annamari said...

"trees thrash" - it does suggest so well the sound the trees make "in high winds"...

Devika said...

Nice one, CGP :-)

pour could be next!?

wishes
devika

polona said...

ah, the indifferent clouds :)
good one

Janice Thomson said...

Great contrast Juliet. We had trees coming down with the winds the past few days too.

Every Photo Tells A Story said...

Great rhythm! That's what I love about haiku in general. Yours is done perfectly.

mum of critters said...

windy here too and the fires... the fires... southern california is on fire this week!

Rabbits' Guy said...

Our clouds are low, and dark, and lumpy. They race by ....

kouji said...

brilliant contrast. :)

jem said...

Great contrasts here - a real sense of the difference that level makes.

angel said...

I really liked this. Short and to the point.

Greyscale Territory said...

Love how your trees provide the sound orchestration and the clouds provide visual silence on the move! Powerful!