Sunday, 20 April 2008

haiku

chaffinches fight -
cherry blossom petals
fall

8 comments:

Scot said...

yes--captured this with beauty

Janice Thomson said...

You paint a lovely picture with your words

polona said...

interesting juxtaposition... says much about life cycles as well.

Tommaso Gervasutti said...

Marvellous haiku, Crafty and flashing as they must be: words and sounds standing out in vastness.

darkwhispersdale said...

I love watching chaffinches. A beautiful poem makes me think of Roath Park in Cardiff city.

abz said...

I love the image this creates. Very beautiful. I've never actually seen a chaffinch, but they look pretty. :D

tumblewords said...

Finely captured!

Selma said...

Thank you for your links to the pics of the birds. I am enjoying refreshing my memories of British birds. Lovely, lovely haiku.