sunrise
paints the clouds -
birds sing.
I've posted another haiku on daybreak on my Alter Ego blog.
Daybreak for One Deep Breath
PS - I'm really pleased that Haiku Scotland recently accepted five of my haiku for publication in their September and December 2007 issues.
17 comments:
Oh well done - good stuff! I was so inspired by yours that I wrote one last weekend, must put it on my blog when I get a chance.
they have a reason to sing... beautiful!
Wowi....well done crafty:)
Lovely as always. :)
Really beautiful! I can see the clouds and hear the birds --- so lovely. And congratulations on the Haiku Scotland publication -- this is fantastic!!
:)
A beautiful word picture~well done!
Congraulations on the publication-well deserved :)
Congratulations on the publication!
Painting the sky... it does.
I think we got on the same daybreak wave. Very simple and nice!
Yes. Exactly. Love it.
Congratulations! And impressive color in the haiku!
Clouds really do look painted at times...I agree! And there's no better sound than birds singing in the morning (unless they're waking you up before you're ready to get out of bed!).
there's something so perfect about this one...a bit of truth all neatly tucked into three lines
Oh...I was going too fast...I must say CONGRATULATIONS on the publication of your work!!!
I sing to it as well. In fact, I can see out my window now the palette being readied. Beautiful poem. Captures it marvelously.
And a hearty congratulations to you on the publication!
Beautiful piece. And congratulations on your publication!
Your haiku is lovely. Congratulations on your poetry being accepted for publication!
great imagery with sunrise painting the clouds!
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