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Friday, 7 October 2016

haiku

turning leaves -
a vee of geese
skeins the sky

on second thoughts, after reading Simon's comment below, I think this is a better version

 turning leaves -
pink footed geese
skein the sky
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9 comments:

  1. Simon Douglas Thompson2:35 pm

    I must keep an eye out for high flying pink footed geese on my travels!

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  2. Crafty Green Poet3:22 pm

    Hi Simon, I saw several skeins today, definitely the time of year for them!

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  3. Gingi6:35 pm

    Beautiful. I suck at haikus. I even bought a haiku book once.. but still... nope. Still suck at them! Yours are lovely! <3 - http://www.domesticgeekgirl.com

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  4. Lynn10:10 pm

    Lovely! And I love the vees of geese.

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  5. Lowcarb team member12:13 am

    I like both versions ...

    Happy Weekend Wishes

    All the best Jan

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  6. Bill2:48 am

    "pink-footed" raises a good haiku another notch.

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  7. Draffin Bears9:20 am

    Hi Juliet,

    I always enjoy your haikus - thanks for sharing.
    Enjoy the weekend
    Hugs
    Carolyn

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  8. Pietro Brosio6:46 am

    A very pretty haiku, both versions.

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  9. Sandy5:03 pm

    I like both versions.

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