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Tuesday, 19 November 2013

haiku

not enough starlings
for a murmuration -
dusky moon

5 comments:

  1. Very lovely. :)

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  2. So precise, so evocative ...

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  3. Very great, intensely "silent" and vibrant.

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  4. Very nice. I just saw a small flock of starlings by my place for the first time yesterday.

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  5. Hi Juliet, Maureen here. I very much enjoyed your haiku today. When I was 10 we studied haiku in school -the traditional 5-7-5 syllables. I still remember what I wrote:

    sunset in the west
    burning coals on open hearths
    not as red as sky

    Remember, I was just 10! :)

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