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Wednesday, 9 October 2013

Tanka

visions
of high wild mountains
in distant lands -
ravens circle
the town cemetery
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8 comments:

  1. Optimistic Existentialist6:40 pm

    Oh I really like this.

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  2. Tommaso Gervasutti6:57 pm

    Raven circle
    the town cemetery

    ...
    I got the news David King passed away.
    I will miss his great voice Juliet.

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  3. The Weaver of Grass7:27 pm

    Do you have ravens in Scotland Juliet?

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  4. Crafty Green Poet7:29 pm

    Optimistic - thanks

    Tommaso - ywes very sad news about David

    Weaver - we get ravens in Edinburgh! They were circling the cemetry in Colinton which inspired this tanka...

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  5. James Brush9:53 pm

    Beautiful.

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  6. James Brush9:54 pm

    Lovely.

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  7. eileeninmd12:34 am

    I like this, it is so easy to picture in my mind.

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  8. Kathie Brown1:37 am

    Well, that is a story in a nutshell! What an image these words paint!

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