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Thursday, 22 March 2012

haiku

on her nest -
a brooding coot
yawns





previously published in Blithe Spirit, the journal of the British Haiku Society

8 comments:

  1. You've captured the patience and weariness of waiting. I love the "yawns."

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  2. I love the little moment you portrayed!

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  3. The one-word last line is hard to bring off, but you've done it here. Good one.

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  4. Anonymous8:31 pm

    Those nest hours much not be easy!

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  5. Anonymous12:10 am

    That's a gorgeous haiku!

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  6. Wonderful. And I love coots!

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