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Sunday 24 October 2010

playground haiku

children's playground -
a crow balances
on a swing


previously published in Blithe Spirit, the journal of the British Haiku Society

9 comments:

  1. Anonymous9:10 pm

    That doesn't surprise me, crows will try anything.

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  2. I have the best mental image of this. Wonderful!
    xx, shell

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  3. Your words evoke a lovely picture in my mind. :)

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  4. The words you have shared of the playground are wonderful.

    Happy week
    Carolyn

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  5. A delightful cameo - fanciful but doubtless true!

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  6. sandy - won't they just!

    Michelle, EG Wow, Draffin Bears - thanks!

    Caroline - all true, it was very entertaining to watch

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  7. Another excellent image. Your haikus are such treats.

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  8. Excellent haiku.
    i cant count the amount of times i've seen that vision. lol

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  9. Anonymous10:05 am

    Haha - love it - what an image of the crow on the swing.

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