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Sunday, 22 August 2010

haiku

centipede
stranded on a pavement -
sudden shower

7 comments:

  1. Thanks for sharing this! Have you discovered The Haiku Foundation -- there's a link on my facebook page. Looks interesting! Keep writing! Always enjoy your work and lovely way with words!

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  2. Oh, that's just a great picture!

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  3. what a great image you've created. i can picture the centipede trying to find cover and getting doused all the while. hope all is well.

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  4. I'm thinking all those little feet on hot pavement, the shower is a welcome relief.

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  5. Very nice. I'd say "the pavement," but two nations divided by a single language and all that.

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  6. I am feeling very sorry for the centipede.

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  7. Centipedes are so cool though, must have been fascinating being able to study it. I hope it managed to continue its journey though?

    Alan
    The With Words International Online Haiku Competition 2010: weblink to competition page
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