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Monday 2 February 2009

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a flurry of hail
clatters against the window -
bare cherry trees bend.


I wrote another haiku about the hail, you can read it on Winter Haiku here.
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20 comments:

  1. Dave King10:04 am

    They are equally appealing.

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  2. Anonymous1:36 pm

    Nice one, Juliet! Haiku (especially yours) is a good picture-frame for the natural world.

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  3. d. moll, l.ac.2:41 pm

    Perfect, sounds like a wood block print.....

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  4. New Yorker wannabes3:50 pm

    Such beautiful pictures and a great blog!

    Thank you for commenting on my blog...its an honour for me to be visited by creative people such as yourself!

    Greetings from Greece
    till next time
    take care
    peace and love
    xoxo

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  5. George3:58 pm

    I like both of them.

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  6. Claire MW5:07 pm

    Thanks for visiting my blog today, and saying hello to Butterscotch Bunny. I noticed a visitor from Edinburgh before, a few weeks ago maybe...I wonder if it was you!

    I loved your haiku today, and also the pictures from both the botanic gardens. Makes me very anxious for spring to appear.

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  7. Devika Jyothi5:10 pm

    I liked both Juliet, this one more :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  8. Gordon Mason6:09 pm

    Nice one Juliet! That was Edinburgh today in a nutshell.

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  9. Anonymous7:37 pm

    I LOVE the sound of this haiku.
    "clatters against the window"
    and envisioning those "bare cherry trees bend(ing)"

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  10. Art and Poetry8:45 pm

    Very nice Haiku!

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  11. get zapped9:07 pm

    Splendid touch with nature. Great imagery.

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  12. Janice Thomson12:44 am

    Both of these are wonderful! The gull one is a very powerful image.

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  13. Anonymous12:44 am

    I particularly like the image of the cherry trees. Exquisite.

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  14. Noah the Great2:23 am

    Awesome work, as always. :D

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  15. RG3:00 am

    Makes me want to stay inside ...

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  16. Pamela Terry and Edward5:15 am

    Shivery winter words! Love this!

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  17. Anonymous8:02 am

    That blew me away!

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  18. shadows and clouds8:49 am

    i agree about it sounding like a wood block print! you really framed a strong image there, and one that i'd like to be able to hop inside of!

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  19. Lisa Nanette Allender1:28 am

    Cherry TRees! Wow!
    btw, have you been to Betmo's Blog? I have a link at my:
    www.lisananetteallender.blogspot.com
    Betmo apparently does a lot of Haiku, too.
    You'll enjoy her.

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  20. Mistlethrush9:59 am

    An inspiring and forward-looking haiku.

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