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Saturday, 25 October 2008

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windblown willow tree -
twenty long tailed tits leap
from branch to branch

11 comments:

  1. Anonymous2:47 pm

    lovely image and alliteration. :)

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  2. Long tailed tits - one of my favourite birds. Love the image.

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  3. Anonymous4:15 pm

    Gorgeous image.

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  4. Love the analogy of the long tails and long willow leaves - wonderful!

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  5. A really telling verse.

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  6. that's lovely

    i watched these birds just yesterday in the park... well, actually i heard them before i could see them dahing from limb to limb

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  7. Wonderfully lyrical verse. I love your banner photograph as well. Thank you too for your nice comment on my blog.

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  8. Pretty visual,this haiku is wonderful
    on the tongue.

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  9. I agree with Janice. I love the analogy! Beautiful!

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  10. I adore your haikus. Hope you get a book together!

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